Wednesday, March 04, 2009

rush

Panting...


phew...


a rush
crazy one at it
a rush
pushing all aside
a rush
pulsing through
a rush

a rush
cannot hold it back any more

a rush
a rush

2 comments:

Dimple said...

What was the urgency for the RUSH..u shud hav explained that..this poem givs wrong impression ..or may b the RIGHT one..;)

Sudi said...

now that u have mentioned.... rush came with a feeling of losing something and running out of time... sensed it just as i snapped out of a dream where i was feeling robbed of my own life.... :)

it was exactly the same feeling i felt when i woke up and wrote it down immediately. now that u mentioned.... it does send give a wrong impression if looked at a diff perspective :)